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Southstreet by ~Para-Lilyy:iconPara-Lilyy:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Narrative > Song


i cant bare to look up, with a crooked look fixed on my face
so i just look down at the matching pavement
i belong there in the ground
cause its how i feel now, my lungs are buried under 10 feet of cement
and the way our feet shuffle
its the only thing i notice
as i try to come up with something
a line, or a comment
and i look up for a second
and they just slip out
from under the pavement
the cracks in the grout

i hope you didn't hear me
crying as i walked off southstreet
i know that those are my feet
but i don't know where they are leading
i don't know where they are leading
i don't know where they are leading


i didn't think you would return my call
cause your not one for words
and the side walk just kept on catching me
every time i was about to fall
i guess the world isn't falling after all

i hope you didn't hear me
crying as i walked off southstreet
i know that those are my feet
but i don't know where they are leading
i don't know where they are leading
i don't know where they are leading

i don't belong here
i don't deserve air
i don't belong here

i hope you didn't hear me
crying as i walked off southstreet
i know that those are my feet
but i don't know where they are leading
i don't know where they are leading
i don't know where they are leading

i don't belong here

i hope you didn't hear me
crying as i walked off southstreet
i know that those are my feet
but i don't know where they are leading
i don't know where they are leading
i don't know where they are leading
©2008-2009 ~Para-Lilyy
:iconpara-lilyy:

Author's Comments

uhhg. i met up with this guy, who i hadnt talked to in a year, and it was so... weird. so i wrote a song about it.

it just proves how lame i am, i walked off, crying.


comment on my amazingness.

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:icondryadwrangler:
~Dryadwrangler Oct 8, 2008, 2:21:17 PM
So it was a bad idea?

ALSO
Capitalize your i's or I will murder you.
:iconpara-lilyy:
~Para-Lilyy Oct 8, 2008, 3:00:53 PM
its always a bad idea. ALWAYS. and no! NEVER!
i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i .

go back to jew temple.

--
i wanna live in my music....
:iconacidjuice:
~Acidjuice Oct 9, 2008, 9:03:14 AM
y'know talkin to you you dont think that you would write somethin this......meh......anyway nice

--
......Meh
Come Git Some--> [link]
:iconpara-lilyy:
~Para-Lilyy Oct 9, 2008, 9:29:46 AM
????

dude, what did you think, i was really that stupid?

--
i wanna live in my music....
:iconacidjuice:
~Acidjuice Oct 9, 2008, 9:49:47 AM
not stupid but....[oh boy do i love diggin myself into holes]...random

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......Meh
Come Git Some--> [link]
:iconpara-lilyy:
~Para-Lilyy Oct 9, 2008, 12:05:56 PM
yup. i can be very random, but im not oblivious.

--
i wanna live in my music....
:iconacidjuice:
~Acidjuice Oct 9, 2008, 3:18:27 PM
no that would be me

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......Meh
Come Git Some--> [link]
:iconpara-lilyy:
~Para-Lilyy Oct 9, 2008, 5:07:30 PM
ha, at least you can draw?

--
i wanna live in my music....
:icondryadwrangler:
~Dryadwrangler Oct 9, 2008, 9:40:57 PM
DEVIANTART WON'T DELETE THE MESSAGE. D:
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